WordWeaver1357

Thank you so much! I really appreciate this feedback. Your review brought a smile to my face on a lonely evening :) Have a wonderful day/night!

Hi! Thanks a lot for the review! I was also contemplating whether to type 'got' instead of 'get', but decided to go with the latter as it matched the story's ...

Thank you so much for the review! I completely understand the paragraph break part. I'll improve it! -WordWeaver1357

Absolutely amazing. This is unlike all the banal, repetitive poems I read often. Bitter but written in a 'fairytale' language, if you get what I mean. ♡

Hi, there, PKMichelle! Thank you SO much for this review! I actually use British English where I'm writing from, so for me, 'colour' is what I've learnt since I was ...

Thank you so much for the review! That's exactly the emotion I wanted to convey through my words. - WordWeaver1357

Thanks! Nice to meet a fellow pluviophile :)

Thank you so much! :)

This was ABSOLUTELY amazing! The descriptions are spot-on and their moment of realisation was truly...spooky. The mood is consistent and the last line leaves the reader hooked even after the ...