Wondergirl59

This is a great poem. There is one line that doesn't sound right. "Fueled on by alcohol". There isn't enough syllables to it. It has great imagery. Overall it's great. ...

Hey! I really like this poem. it has a really nice flow to it. I like the sensory to it. Great job.

I like this. I think my favorite part of the last line. It's kind of messy but I think that gives in character. I was wondering if this was your ...

Loved it! This has great imagery, and I really, really like the last line. But what I really want to say is it's soooo cute!!! I loved it! :D

I love it! Everything here is really true. I read the spoiler and I like the first one better. Anyways really great job with the poem. :)

This was very different, but very good. I like the flow. I also like the anomalous rhymes. Nice:)

This is amazing. I like the poem/story mix. You put really great description into your main character. I also really liked the last line. That was awesome. I loved it, ...

Hey. I liked the flow of it. It went smoothly. I liked it a lot. It could have been a little more elaborate and more detail. But overall I liked ...

I absolutely loved it! It was so funny and you should make more!!!!! :)

Nice! Really creative. Not all understandable but awesome and clever all the same. :)

I like it. It's dark and evil, something we all have in us. I like how you make her sound like a creeper.

Oh my god. This is so sad. If this actually happened to someone you know, I'm so sorry. To you and them. But I really liked the poem, beside the ...

I love this. It's original, and a cool love poem. I like the format of it. It's really cool :)

I thought it was nice. Well, not really considering self-destruction and depression came up once or twice. But in the sense of how well the writing is, I'd say I ...

I really like this. It shows your emotion for the subject, and how you are remembering loved ones. Very good. :)