Wonder

The computer wasn't working, so...yeah.

There was one....oh my God I absolutely HATE super slow computers. D:

Amazing. That was SUPER SUPER SUPER GOOD!!! At the end I was all like, "Aww." And my mouth turned down at the corners. :( It's perfect. The story is perfect. ...

Nor I!

Okay, edited it. :)

Rhyming comes easy to me -- that's why I've been writing poetry and songs for quite a while now. I'll edit the poem now so that it has line breaks ...

I know, I know, I'm sorry. >.< My computer decided to be all weird on me and not work. I have a really bad habit of always capitalizing the first ...

Congrats. You have reached the epitome of randomness, or at least the most I have seen in my short lifespan. x3

And it'll make more sense as you read the next would look a lot better as a whole book.

Thanks ArticMonkey! :) i'll edit this ASAP -- your review really helped!! ~Wonder

Thanks so much for the review!! Oooh, I meant 'clipped' instead of dipped. That was a typo. x3 Thanks for pointing that out. :3 I'll definitely continue the story, now. ...

Aww, thank you Kelsey!! x3 I feel really happy about all these reviews. ^-^

Yeah, thank you! ;) I think I just threw in the 'war and hate' part randomly, just to make it rhyme, as at the time I didn't really care about ...

For a rap?? I just rapped this, and I'm grinning as I write. Great for a rap - now go rap it and post it on YouTube. xD

Thank you! I'll drop the semi-colon like you suggested, and I'll play around with my words choice. That's the fun in writing poetry! :D (I try to make all my ...