Wolferion

Cheers! Let's get to it, shall we. At first I'd like to say this isn't half-bad, easy to read, not troublesome to enjoy and does kind of have a thought. ...

Cheers! Quite a helly long chapter you've got here, but it's quite the length you'd find in a real book. I haven't read many of the previous chapters, I prefer ...

Surprising to see somebody else here who's english isn't mother language too. You've got a wide dictionary, it's easy to see if you read tons of works here on YWS. ...

Cheers! Alright, let's tear it apart as much as possible. Before I crush it, I'd like to say that your word play amused me, not in the mocking way, in ...

Cheers! Thanks for asking, time to value the worth. First I'd like to mention that I liked your way of 'narrating', If I focused only on words and what it ...

Cheers! I'm here as requested. I've reread this like twice to get the full meaning, so let's get to the core. As a narrative poem I'd agree that the imaginery, ...

Cheers! I noticed you made some changes, many of them were what Skins mentioned and I have to admit he saved me the trouble at nit-picks ( Seriously, it's my ...

Cheers JRS! Thanks for asking =) As the poem is short, I won't go saying my opinion for each stanza and jump to 'Overall' to say what I think. To ...

Cheers Blackbird! Thanks a lot for requesting, even though the last time I came back online so late that your work was under revision and still is as far as ...

Cheers! Came across this while freelancing on the forums. A first try at poetry? I'd have to say it's a nice try. For a free verse the rhythm wasn't bad ...

Cheers! Read it on one breathe, following the rhythm. I'd have to admit I honestly like this version much more. I had no trouble following the rhythm and imagining along, ...

Cheers Silent! =) Alright, let me start with the fact that I was caught off guard - the form of this poem just ain't ordinary at all nor usual. I ...

Cheers Yuri! First time I'm giving you a review instead of you reviewing mine stuff heh. Soz, let's get to it. I review poems by first giving my opinion on ...

Cheers! I'm here as asked. As this is a poem I'll first put my opinion as a 'reader' at each stanza. The air wet with blood, The sound of organs ...

Cheers! I'd go and agree with TaulaPaulwic about it being cliche, many of us have heard about it, though many forget. I'm not a grammar focused writer and not any ...