Wolfdancer95

I love it! The background to getting to the mirror was well done, and her personality was shown with her concerns of being expelled. I particually liked the third paragraph ...

The last paragragh... Was awesome. the only nit-pick I have is= I am the worker, the fighter, the monster, th e liver , the lover. That jarred me a little. ...

You did Wolf pack research! you have no idea how many people put wolves in their story and NOT research (No one on on this site I know of.) Intersting ...

I had only read this one chapter, I found it surprising I could follow the story and understand what was going on. The grammer mistakes were passible and hard to ...

The layout was a little jarring, When someone spoke and the action is on another line, you can merge dialogue and action, and Lady Purple did a good job with ...

One interpritation of Schizophrenia, I wonder how this is going to go, the first chapter doesn't give much hint to what's about to happen. The red and Blue thing is ...

Very nice, Interesting and I like how you had it from her general POV. It was a little short (to my standards, but it maybe just the site layout) but ...

Dude. DUDE. Minds think A like, I was JUST writing on a workshop Idea from a year ago (In a few days I'm putting it up, I did NOT copy ...

Wow. Jarring, a squimish topic I couldn't stop reading until I was done, and a ending that puts soup opera's and the like to shame. What makes it strangely fantastic ...