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Another girl stood several metres away from the first as they threw a white and black striped football back and fourth. There's no 'u' in forth. she kicked the ball ...

Oh god. My name is Camille. :shock: Now I'm seriously freaked! That was well-written, though. However, I can't give an in-depth review because everything has already been mentioned. :( Great ...

I don't know what an Archaic poem is, but that was quite good. I'm not a fan of the Old English words (thou, thine etc) but I still really enjoyed ...

Wow! You write poetry too? So not fair. Jk!! :P Anyways, this was really good. For the sake of the work you put into this, I hope that girl likes ...

Ok. This is going to take a long time. I might get booted off the computer, so I might just to half tonight then the rest tomorrow. My comments are ...

I haven't read this *is ashamed* It's just too long. I strongly suggest separating it into separate posts or at least sections. :wink: If you do, I'll review.

(Turn agasnt me once again!) I get the feeling that you meant to say 'against' instead of agasnt'. :wink: Well, Suzanne already got the stuff I noticed. This is pretty ...

I hope to be able to say the truth on day, I hope I will be soon [s]on[/s] one my way, Towards my goal, To you, I wish I could ...

*sighs* I can't give you a decent review since Azila and BBB have already pointed all the things out that I noticed... But just let me say that that was ...

My comments are in bold. :) Oh, and I started this review a while ago, so if I repeated things that have already been said... i have edited this according ...

Nova flung the covers off and shot across the room grabbing her notebook. This is great! Now we actually have a chance of surviving in this forsaken… I think there ...

I get that feeling too--where I feel like I have to write--but the outcome [for me] is never nearly as good. This was a very interesting poem. I really liked ...

The morning sun warms the dark As the happy song of a calling lark Fills the air with music The trees sway gently in the daylight and rest there until ...

I really liked that poem--very emotional, and I thought the way you put it together was very whimsical. As usual with your poetry/lyrics, I can't think of anything you should ...

Wow! That was really, really good. I loved how if flowed and I dunno, it just sounded really good :D I'm not very good at reviewing poetry, and well, there's ...