Wojovox

Get back in her face. Though her actions are wrong, she does them in confidence, though it may be an unsure confidence. Sounds like from her screaming, the only way ...

Suprised no one has pointed this out, but the sun dosn't go completely around the world night after night, and as well it dosn't stop and one end to return ...

suprising this thread hasn't been locked. Some other threads about abortion have been. this could start an argument but then again it's a poem. But to the other reviewers of ...

Didn't find it hugely moving, but honest. Guess you're not on good terms with your mother. The kiss was a mature decision granted we as the reader don't know what ...

No more lies that Were surprisingly true Take away everything That reminds me Of you Want my opinion?, ok, I'll give it to you just this once. Reconstruct a whole ...

Another heartbreak song........who would have guessed? and don't say I'm patronizing. There's a difference between cruelty and truth. want to know what love is......I know. Love is not what you're ...

another heartbreak written into song. I believe there will be a day when heartbreak songs are a thing of the past. They are very difficult to make sound original. and ...

short, sweet, simple. A perfect poem for a middle school literature book. Maybe with a small illustration above the caption. A picture of a young girl asleep in a hammock ...

What if everything you mentioned is your own false encouragement? what if there is no reason or God? what if everything we believed was just conditioned upon us? imagine a ...

Heartbreak, possibly? you have rhythmic sense and a lynical way of writing, and the darkness is good. Darkness within writing seems to be huge outlet for creativity. BUT who are ...

What is this seem to be? What does it mean? What does it want? What does it need from me? I know, PEER EVALUATION........I don't know what everyone else is ...

reminds me of English class in 9th grade, freshman year of high school, when my teacher wanted us to write a short poem or story about anything. She asked us ...

haha, made me smile. A little childish though. when you mention "I know how to make things fun" you should reply something like "I sexually satisfy the nun" just to ...

says your age is 12. For such a young age you have a very sophisticated and educated vocabulary. your first verse has a very melodic sense to it, but the ...

Their infection clouds the discernment of what’s fake and what’s real. maybe the best line you had going there, by my standards anyhow. They move like a deadly virus, waiting ...