Wojovox

I'm assuming you lost weight in recent months or years and the "her" you are referring to is the old you. Think that message comes across when you're dpne reading ...

when you ryhme, your second line during the first part of the poem sounds as if it should be in dissappointment though the words speak of what you want. Will ...

It struck a chord with me. my life is at a breaking point and this comforted me a little. It reminded me of how I used to write before I ...

Impressed, and I don't much get that here. Seemed like one of those poems you don't sit down and write, rather you discover it somewhere like it has always been ...

Making me retch and and vomit words I should keep inside. They tumble off of my tounge like suicide This line rolls off the tongue perfectly. And the imagery, although ...

What if in actuality we are the center of the universe? since we have so little intelligence, we have no way of knowing. What if there is no grador scale ...

there's never really much to say about your grammer. And unless you've reviewed time and time again and you plan on mailing this to Time magazine to be issued on ...

good heart in your words. It's not in your preface line that ask for us to go easy on you where I find my reason to give you praise. I ...

Sarcasm is great. One of my expertise. I'm not sure now, I didn't take that as a piece of litterature to be critiqued. Sounded to be you wanted to talk ...

HAHA, Lightheartedly Evil and cynical. Just the way I like my Filet Mignon. It's like a look at the world in 3013 if the human race was a story in ...

your poetry is strong. Every word has it's stance. I can tell this is a strong talent of yours to allow words to fall where they, not only will, but ...

suprisingly good to tell the truth. Puts a good image in my head. I see a townhouse with a simple dressed couple and a feeling of love empty. I'm a ...

epitheliums Cool. I havn't heard that word since Biology 101. But a strange place to use it, though I kinda thought it fit perfectly, made the poem have this strange ...

[quote="Incandescence"]I once thought dimly lit rooms led to bedsheet romances, and stories we would tell our children as they grew old,[quote] Do you intend to tell the children stories you ...

Good one this time. Every line seems to just roll of the tongue. It's very easy to read and it keeps you reading until finished. BUT. at "wondering if you ...