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Re: Bruises
Really deep, sad poem... The style is lovely and the description is incredible I especially love "One day he will realize that black and blue are colors not made for ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: Her..
Really nice... Sad and touching in so many ways. I love the whole story, and this is one of those times when quality really makes up for quantity. Just a ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: High Wire
This is an incredible poem! I really loved it, and overall , it was a delightful read. The flow and wording are really nice, as is the story it tells, ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: Everything in Between
Really lovely piece, but just a few things that could be fixed up: -The flow of the lines doesn't seem too natural, so it might be helpful to try and ...
May 31, 2015
