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Re: #11
Hi Ellie. Winter here, at your service. Highlight Legend: Nitpicks in red, comments in blue, what I liked in green. She walks like a poisoned rose; This sounds a bit ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Goosebumps fan-fiction: Night At Murder Mansion, part 2
Hey Maddie. Winter here, as requested. I was too lazy to skim through the previous chapters, but I think I'll understand what's going on here. I'm only going to review ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Search For Tony Chapter 1
Hi there. Winter here, as requested. ;) Sorry for the slight delay. Now then... shall we? Cynthia was reading a book when her ma came in. Cynthia was a real ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: i wonder
This was absolutely beautiful! It flowed perfectly, and not a cliche idea in sight. The lack of capitalization also softens the poem, which made me adore it even more. My ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue (REVISED)
Hi there, Shubi-chan! :D I can call you Shubi-chan, can't I? (puppy eyes) :lol: Winter here, at your service. First off... This could really use some spacing. I got dizzy ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: What maturity means...
Hi there! Winter here, and I think I owe you a little something-something. :P So, here it is. First off, you got me right at the beginning. The way you ...
Apr 16, 2010