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That's actually a really good point... I never considered that. I'll look over the poem, and probably change it per your suggestion soon. Thanks so much for you review, it ...

Thanks a ton! That's means a lot to me :D And, hmm.. not sure what Hetalia is (care to explain? :D) but, Jeff the killer, yes. I like most creepypasta ...

Surprisingly, that is exactly what inspired this. However, the poem itself is simply a personification of death. I just loved the phrase "Go to Sleep", and this is what came ...

Oh my gosh, that sucks xD it happens far too often with mobile devices egh e,e

Thanks so much for this kind review! I did indeed mean ancestor.. I'm on a tablet, so it tends to auto-correct v,v I'll fix that right away XD Thanks again, ...

It's not at all about someone getting ready to murder someone in their sleep. It's soothing in some parts, and creepy in others, because it's another look at death. It's ...

I'm confused.. are you going to add the chapter later, or? o:

No problem ^-^ And oh gosh, I did! Thanks for the correction xD

Thanks for taking the time to leave such a thorough review :D I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind. Though, I had intended on using the first person narrative as ...

Thanks a ton! I was worried about the rhythm, seeing as I've never attempted non-rhyming poetry before, but you made me feel a lot better! I appreciate the positivity!

Thanks for leaving a review! The point of mentioning the drunk father, was to add some backstory for Ryan, without info-dumping. As for being vague on how the narrator fell ...

Thank you so much! ^~^

Okay, I can see what you're saying. Could I ask what on earth inspired this? xD

I know what you mean! That's why I love writing, sometimes it helps a ton to write down your emotions. Im glad you're feeling better, as well! :)

Thanks for reviewing, I appreciate your positivity! ^~^