Sorry that its short but the next chapter is going to be great so bear with me!:)
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Hi! I'm going to try to review this..... Oh, and Happy review day!
But still, this is a completely random thing that pops up. I repeat again: wwhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyy????????????
So...... Is this chapter two or not chapter two? Confused! Confusion all around! (Wow, giving this a review is hard!)
I agree with FerranWright on the 'where did it go' part. Seriously, where did it go? Was there any of it in the first place?
(I also agree on the suspense part!)
Question: what was your motive for posting the shortest thing I've ever reviewed? It's cool how you actually did this, but then there's the two hundred points..... Are you sure you anted to do that?
This feels so completely random, possibly the most random thing to be floating around in the Green Room! I question again: why?
Another question: is this the actual chapter? Seriously?
One tiny nitpick (it wouldn't be much of a review otherwise, would it?):
'Its' should be '' it's " because it signifies 'it is' and the other doesn't. It makes more sense this way.
Alright, I think that that's enough to consider this a review.
Horrific!!! Where did it go?
This is the best use of a blank chapter I have seen.
A completely empty chapter sitting in the green room inspires me to check out the first.
'But' is unnecessary and detracts form its shortness, it would be better with a comma instead eg; Sorry that its short, the next chapter is going to be great, so bear with me!:)
over all I love the suspence an empty chapter give but wonder why it did not post.
I'm confused.. are you going to add the chapter later, or? o:
No it was suppose to post but it didn't. I am trying to have the first 2 chapters a dream then I wake up from the dream and go from there so bear with me!