Winchester

This maybe the strangest poem I have ever read. But I don't read that much poetry, meaning I can't review and why I'm just leaving a simple comment. Because I ...

Urgh. Everyone has done really long reviews, and I'm just here leaving a comment about how much I loved this, how much the title reminded me of a Busted song, ...

Wow, I have no clue when it comes to poems, I really like this, you make the beach sound like heaven, and I noticed you used Perfect once, then used ...

I love the flow of this, and it has a nice, but sad feeling to it. The way it is written is awsome, and I can picture the person thinking ...

This is great, it's like a new years revolutions for the next 40 years, or somthing... good luck on getting all these done :) P.S: You sound a lot like ...

First of all! WELCOME!!! I can tell your realllllyy talented, and i love this If you need any help, PM me :)

Hey Wicked! Okay first of... Maybe you could work on you ryming, it's ahd to try and sing a song with just words, and what has never had music put ...

Hey Wicked! Okay first of... Maybe you could work on you ryming, it's ahd to try and sing a song with just words, and what has never had music put ...

Hey Wicked! Okay first of... Maybe you could work on you ryming, it's ahd to try and sing a song with just words, and what has never had music put ...

Hey Wicked! Okay first of... Maybe you could work on you ryming, it's ahd to try and sing a song with just words, and what has never had music put ...

Wow...people thought i was an awsome song writer, i would love to hear this sung! its amazing i know its about love/heart brake but you twisted it. Keep writing!! RIS!

Wow...ermm whats a lyrebird? But this is short and snappy and well written :)

Awww This is cute :) i think you captured the feelings perfectly

Hey, good job overall but your writing it like a letter to Romeo, yea yea i know its a diary entery but it seems to muck like a letter. Like ...