WillowPaw1

Hi, Raven! Hmm... It looks like everyone's pretty much covered the nitpicks, so I won't waste any time with those. We'll just skip right ahead! Okay - I really like ...

Hi, ScarletDreams! Let's get this review started. *cracks knuckles* Hmm.. First of all, it's great to write about things to just let it all out, and you're even brave enough ...

Happy Review Day! Let's get this review started. Nitpicks I swear saw you- I think you're missing a letter here. ;) I swear I saw you “But, I saw you’re ...

Hi, Therese! GoldFlame pointed most of the nitpicks out, but I'm going to point a couple more out and of I accidently point the same one out then oops. :3 ...

Hi, thewriter13! We meet again! *cracks knuckles* Okay... So this review is probably going to be pretty short because te overall piece wasn't lengthy one bit (it was a prologue, ...

Hello, Raven! ^.^ WillowPaw1 has arrived! Whoopie... Okay, I'm going to pass on the nitpicks for today. There wasn't as much as there usually is. I spotted a fragment and ...

WillowPaw1 has arrived! ^.^ Luckily, he was able to go home not too long after that, with Ashley helping him home. "Home" seems quite repetitive here. I think the second ...

Hello, Cesare! :) Yes, agreed with previous reviewers: this poem is obviously personal and it touched me deep down. You know, that feeling? :3 I can't really explain it, but ...

Hey, Pinkie! Hmm. First off, I've never seen Sidney spelled like that. Usually it's Sydney, like in Australia. Anyways~ So, there were grammar errors with the past and present tense ...

Hey! Here as requested! Sorry I'm a bit late :3 Anyways~ Wow- so I love your style of writing, it kinda reflects on Layla's personality a bit, you know? The ...

Heyyyy! Okay, first a couple of critiques. #1: There were fairly a lot of errors. Most ha to do with lack of apostrophes where they should be (in possession and ...

Hey! Nitpicks Its like they want to be one with Death. It's* like a glass' Waist. Apostrophe after glass? :/ And they have Big attitudes. And swing their Hips all ...

Hey, 1morestupidlovesong! (By the way: amazing profile picture) WillowPaw1 here to review! Yes! Almost everyone on this site can totally relate to this! I'm obsessed as I'm sure many others ...

Hi, thewriter13! (You need a good nickname. I can't think of anything). Soo, you're unsure of this poem? Hm. I'll try and make you feel more confident. Your imagery is ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! First off - ignore my age, I know everything you said already and I'm just going to focus on everything but that . Kay? Okay. I ...