WillowPaw1

Hi there! :) Nitpicks Those menacing , bright , yellow eyes. Add in the commas. stick my claws in your cage and rip off your tail! And I will gladly ...

Hi there! WillowPaw1 here to review! I have a couple nitpicks for you. Same meaning, same rhythm same rhymes. I'm pretty sure there is a comma after "rhythm"? No inspiration, ...

Hi! :) WillowPaw here! O.O ... WOAH! I am in love with this! It is so beautiful! :) Positive Comments I just love the similes and metaphors you stuck in ...

Hi! WillowPaw here as requested! :) I'm dividing the review into two sections: positive comments and constructive criticism. Positive Comments I like the names of your characters, and the cities. ...

Hi! Here as requested! I haven't read your previous chapters, but you specifically requested this one, so I'll do it anyways. Nitpicks Suddenly he heard some kind of voice he's ...

Hi again! Nitpicks The white part of her hair fell in front of her eyes ; Rease brushed it out of her face, then looked glanced around looking for a ...

Hey there! :) Me again. I'm finally here! I'll point out nitpicks first. She sat in on the swingset outside the grey house. I think you can take out the ...

Hi there! I'll do nitpicks first. ^_^ It’s the anniversary of when dad died, so mum’s shut herself in her room and Cody went to get pissed 'Mum' and 'Dad' ...

Hi there! I am going to be writing a short review for you. Nitpicks I actually don't have may so I'll just skip over this! Last Lines I think the ...

Hi! Happy Review Day! Nitpicks What was my brother thinking, I asked myself. If you asked, it would be a question. “Simmer move!” yelled a familiar voice. Comma after Simmer. ...

Hi there! I'm mostly just going to write positive things, so this review will be extremely short. The thing I like most about this is just, well, your plot. I ...

Hi there! I haven't read previous chapters, so I'll mostly blab about your format and point out nitpicks. Nitpicks Fine, my training will come in handy when they come in ...

Hi there! Happy Review Day! Here is just a quick review for you. :) So, I never really think about roses, just that they're given to show love, they have ...

Hi there! Happy Review Day! Wow, so I love how you incorporated a fear some people have into something you (or this "person") love. And you tell why! :) Some ...

Hi there! Happy Review Day! Okay, so wow. Intense chapter. Nitpicks "Yeah you, idiot! Comma after "yeah". A first aid kit from the bathroom goes in, an extra outfit, and ...