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Re: Your problems are fake; destroy yourself.
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Mar 22, 2016 -
Re: Your problems are fake; destroy yourself.
Hey Aley! I think I kind of want to respond to how you thought the stanzas worked. Here's how they are in my mind; Stanza 1: Character is a smart ...
Mar 22, 2016 -
Re: Heights
Hey, Keepwriting. You've been reminded this at least a hundred times by mods and other poets. You don't need punctuation in poetry, it's all poetic style. Poets can choose whether ...
Mar 19, 2016 -
Re: Full/Frontal/Defeated/At/Last
I labeled them because they're all only connected by a small piece of thread, so it might seem out of place if I didn't have them. Plus, it matched with ...
Mar 12, 2016 -
Re: My YWS Addiction
"Standard English peeps" You do realize that, stylistically, poets don't have to? There's a KB article about it, and I recommend checking it out.
Mar 2, 2016 -
Re: Exponential fat increase
It's about the Vietnam war and deontological values. Thanks!
Feb 23, 2016 -
Re: Exponential fat increase
It's called poetry.
Feb 22, 2016 -
Re: Exponential fat increase
They're supposed to be humorous. Thanks!
Feb 22, 2016 -
Re: Porno / Negro
alternatively titled Portnoy/Negro. Kidding, this was awesome to read.
Feb 18, 2016 -
Re: Delayed.
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Feb 15, 2016 -
Re: To Think I Used To Be Your Savior
Dope, Silv. This is nice.
Feb 14, 2016 -
Re: My YWS Addiction
As an active user of the site, I find what Nate did incredible and I love the community. However, if I felt the need to share that, a better way ...
Feb 14, 2016 -
Re: I can't see through this blindfold god help me
It isn't nice to trash people, 15. If you have nothing nice to say then don't say anything at all ;)
Feb 7, 2016 -
Re: Wiener dogs in Terezin
The girl is aware, as it was said in the fourth and sixth stanza. It's basically the girl saying "you're a really cool guy and all, and i find you ...
Jan 24, 2016 -
Re: inspired by David Bowie
It was horrible timing. I don't want people to think I named this after him because he died, since I wrote and titled it on Friday. Life is confusing.
Jan 11, 2016
