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Re: Society's The Death Of Me
Get away from the twisted society. Suicide? I find this in a straight line This, to me, is dark just like everything else I read. I do like it. You ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: The Little Girl Inside of Me
Meihn Fuhr! This piece was moving. I really liked it, to be honest. The only con I would give it is the use of carefree. Not saying you used it ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: The Little Girl Inside of Me
Meihn Fuhr! This piece was moving. I really liked it, to be honest. The only con I would give it is the use of carefree. Not saying you used it ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: brighter day
Meihn Fuhr! This piece is fluent. It was some what confusing with no stanzas and no clear ending of the stanza. Luckily, your capitalisation made it clear enough. It's dark. ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: Butterfly Kisses
Very short. I never got the jist in this. I always think something comedic/dark when a piece first comes in mind. This is what I took from it Butterflies (The ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: Explanation of Color for the Blind
This is somewhat dark, yet moving. I was impressed. I love the expression, with the point of view. It is true, it is mostly dark, but it really shows the ...
Jul 4, 2013