Wildecharlie818

I really liked the subject it was original, creative and interesting. Thanks for posting it. One thing bothered me a lot and that is grammar. Capital letters are of huge ...

The whole poem is a bit confusing, but the sentence structure is pretty good. You need to work on the flow of your poems, this one was far too disjointed. ...

I loved the beginning of the poem but the ending fell kinda flat for me. There was a couple of lines that seemed awkward: "The snowmoblie lerched forward, and so ...