Wiggy

I like this, reida. I notice your poems are always uplifting and inspiring, and this is prolly my favorite one. I love the theme of forgiveness-it's something we all need. ...

Excellent work, Cal! I don't have time for a full crit right now, but I do have a few points I'd like to bring up. I'll post soon! But for ...

That was awesome! It was one of those that made me feel all warm and fuzzy like I wanted to hug a teddy bear. *hugs bear* Good job!

Wow, that was weird. :shock: But I liked it all the same! It was a kind of eccentrically sweet ending. I've never read anything like it before!

Awesome job! This is a really unique story, and I love the ending. Robert's such a sweet guy, and I'm so glad that they were able to finish the painting. ...

Ooo-rejection! More, I say, more!

Ahh...thanks Dusky! Poor Ari...*sniffles*

Thanks Brad. Much appreciated crit, as always, and I'll do my best to clear the "junk" out of the way, as your rightly put it. Lexy-always a pleasure to hear ...

Thanks Crys and wm-I'll try my best! I know I need to tie it together somehow...it's just the that thing I need to actually do it! That one word or ...

Great job! Powerful, yet morbidly fascinating at the same time. You have a great way with words...I wouldn't say it's necessary to use the language (like the f word and ...

Thanks Jack. :D I wrote this when I was sitting outside in a park, and my main purpose was to describe fall. I don't know where the whole "gone with ...

Aww Jack you made me feel so special. :D Yeah, the line breaks was what I was having trouble with. I couldn't figure out the best places for them...any suggestions? ...

Umm...can I repeat everyone else? Short and sweet and cute and simple. I like! Wiggy ;)

Good job Amy! :D Write more nonfiction!

I want to hear more! lol Good story, work on spacing and grammar, but post the last part of the story! What a cliffhanger! lol