WhisperInTheWind

Nice! Definite improvement - witty with involving Jack Sparrow, but I gotta tell you I'm a Will Turner fan all the way xD. I loved how you worked this piece ...

Hey! It wasn't long before even I was new at YWS! This is great work by you! I have to say, it shows you have talent and a natural hand ...

Hey there! I think Inkheart is a fabulous series with all the emotions, drama and effort put into it! The whole concept is magical! My favorite character is of course ...

:elephant: Irishfire! Nice work there, teamie! That was neat and long and I can see you've put beautiful personal touches to it! I sound like a techer, don't I? The ...

Nice. Short but sweet. You could have done better. Try working on your rhythm, and write more and more poetry. It's just a thought. :D But I like it. It ...

Hey Hannah, Irish, Mazo and I have ended up reviewing the same piece of yours, lolz. Once again, I really really thank you for making me a part of your ...

Hey Irish! As random as this was, I have to say I Loved this!! It was well thought of and the humour was nicely done! Hey I hate em too, ...

Hey Mazo, I'm PP (or Whisper) and I'll be your 3rd teammate as soon as I'm accepted! I really liked your story. It was catchy and it had my eyes ...