Wesley

???? Wow very descriptive and emotional very good poem I would say not something I enjoyed reading it was very descriptive and emotional and dark. Which I think your intentions ...

I am very confused? It starts out like a rape scene and then ends up being a silly scarcrow helium balloon????? I really don't know what you mean. :smt108

Weird I have mixed feelings I will review later.

This poem gives a reader mixed feelings. It had a good flow for the Alone in the darkness, Without a light in sight, Melancholy threatened to swallow me whole. I ...

Oh wait it is Haiku I didn't read the subline oh lol! It is still awesome I am not very good at Haiku. Awesome job! :)

It sounds like Haiku!:) lol But it is sweet reminds one of a mother watching her baby sleep and thinking of how memories like this will soon be forgotten. All ...

I don't feel a rythm it sounded like just a lot of primiscuos adultery mixed poeticly. As far as content it was okay but I don't like the topic.

Thanks guys poetry is not really my thing so thanks for the help. ;)

This could be catogorized as fantasy.

Draft two The wind shrieked through the trees whipping them mercilessly. The dark sky split open with streaks of lightning and pouring rain. The thunder roared at the moonless night. ...

i wrote this a couple of years ago so it's a little rusty!:biggrin: hope you like it