Werthan

That was very interesting. So the old man is friends with Time? I want to read the next part to see what that was about. The man thought going through ...

This was hilarious, and was very elegant with its use of meter rather than just rhyme. However, I do not get why it is called "I strongly dislike poetry" when ...

I do sympathize with the sentiment of the poem, and you have a lot of really nice rhymes and rhythms. However, if there's ever been a time to say "show, ...

That was strange. It also ran a bit on the long side, but I don't think it was quite too long. Normally I don't read mystery/suspense, but your writing style ...

This is very nice prose, but I do not see what the Pygmalion thing has to do with it, or rainstorms. You need to tie those things in later to ...

I love the metaphor of fire. There's a poem by Goethe that I truly love, that's quite different than yours in theme, that uses the metaphor of a moth at ...

I normally can't stand freeform poems, because too often they just feel like prose with lines in-between, but this one felt very poetic and I actually liked the sound of ...

OK, why does this whole thing read like the narrator is having sex, but is so apathetic to the sex they don't notice, preferring to feel "protected" and "strong arms" ...

Criticisms first: Why is the character named Morbid? That seems rather awkward and unlikely without any explanation, and if he's morbid, that doesn't seem very sympathizable with. Also, the ending ...

This is a very interesting metaphorical piece of fiction. I can't really find any faults with the prose except the first sentence, which I don't think was continuous with or ...

The introduction is awkward and I would completely redo it. The sentences are all short and choppy or run-ons. You shouldn't just state "Ernie is exceptional". I would also work ...

I did not like how you handled the language at the beginning of the story. Having some foreign language does add to the atmosphere of a story, but you just ...

I am very confused about what is happening. Also, I think some of the word choices sound a bit like you're just trying to show off long words. I had ...

The prose is quite amazing and I loved the last sentence. I just feel like something about it was a bit short and I can't figure out what. I would ...

Wow, this is amazing prose. The style is pretty down-to-earth but also fairly sophisticated, and the imagery is quite vivid. The plot is interesting, I want to see what "she ...