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Re: norina's poem (i still miss you)
Love the image of the wind being the messenger of bad news it's quite original¬ Only thing I would say is maybe to think a little about the structure - ...
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Re: Invoke
I would just like to say that I love the images " If we can ignite the brilliance in today" and "Let us hitch a dream to the stars" fantastic!! ...
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Re: When There's No Black or White
I love the colourful nature of the poem its very uplifiting, so well done! My only pick would be perhaps some of your images could do with a little extra ...
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Re: Dawn
Interesting, I like it! It almost has like a biblical twist there at the end,doesn't it, with the image of footrprints in sand? I'd almost compare it to wordworth's Lyrical ...
Nov 2, 2009