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WendyVermillion

WendyVermillion

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Silent Me

    Wendy here to review your poem! The title drew me to your poem, and I really enjoyed it! But there are some things that would have made it better and ...

    Aug 3, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Literature Re: The value of greatness.

    The one thing i want to say is that this is a work ymthat you should be proud of, no matter what anybody else says. I can practically hear you ...

    Jun 27, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I’m In Love With You, I’m sorry.

    Hey, Wendy here, and I'm gonna review your work! :D Personally, as a writer and a human being, I really enjoyed this piece! I've seen a few of my friends ...

    Jun 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: my mind's summer

    Hey, Wendy here to review this piece! The basic idea and concept of this poem is really touching. It can make a reader feel like they can relate to the ...

    Jun 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Before she is gone

    Hey there, Wendy here to review your work! :) Even with the first sentence, I feel drawn to read the rest of this short but interesting piece. Your choice of ...

    Jun 23, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: lovely pictures of you

    This is such a beautiful piece, and it really warms my heart. Might be sounding cringey, but that's just how I feel. The words and thoughts behind this--at least what ...

    Apr 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Mind Your Head

    Ouch, sad ending haha... Nice poem, I really liked it! The paragraphing is kind of weird though because there would be a comma at the end of the line, but ...

    Apr 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: roses and shores

    OH gosh, I love this poem! I wish I could print it all out and post it on my wall--but that would be copyright--and I would go to jail or ...

    Apr 24, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Replace My Blood

    This story--although quite short compared to the things I usually read--was actually quite touching. I myself am straight, but I have a lot of lgbtq+ friends, and I completely support ...

    Apr 24, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Lament Of The Soul-NaPow 4

    Wow, this poem pretty much sums my life up but about a billion times more than this. I am a depressed child (not actually, but I kinda just lead a ...

    Apr 24, 2018


If I seem to wander, if I seem to stray, remember that true stories seldom take the straightest way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind