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Re: Silent Me
Wendy here to review your poem! The title drew me to your poem, and I really enjoyed it! But there are some things that would have made it better and ...
Aug 3, 2018 -
Re: The value of greatness.
The one thing i want to say is that this is a work ymthat you should be proud of, no matter what anybody else says. I can practically hear you ...
Jun 27, 2018 -
Re: I’m In Love With You, I’m sorry.
Hey, Wendy here, and I'm gonna review your work! :D Personally, as a writer and a human being, I really enjoyed this piece! I've seen a few of my friends ...
Jun 23, 2018 -
Re: my mind's summer
Hey, Wendy here to review this piece! The basic idea and concept of this poem is really touching. It can make a reader feel like they can relate to the ...
Jun 23, 2018 -
Re: Before she is gone
Hey there, Wendy here to review your work! :) Even with the first sentence, I feel drawn to read the rest of this short but interesting piece. Your choice of ...
Jun 23, 2018 -
Re: lovely pictures of you
This is such a beautiful piece, and it really warms my heart. Might be sounding cringey, but that's just how I feel. The words and thoughts behind this--at least what ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: Mind Your Head
Ouch, sad ending haha... Nice poem, I really liked it! The paragraphing is kind of weird though because there would be a comma at the end of the line, but ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: roses and shores
OH gosh, I love this poem! I wish I could print it all out and post it on my wall--but that would be copyright--and I would go to jail or ...
Apr 24, 2018 -
Re: Replace My Blood
This story--although quite short compared to the things I usually read--was actually quite touching. I myself am straight, but I have a lot of lgbtq+ friends, and I completely support ...
Apr 24, 2018 -
Re: Lament Of The Soul-NaPow 4
Wow, this poem pretty much sums my life up but about a billion times more than this. I am a depressed child (not actually, but I kinda just lead a ...
Apr 24, 2018
