WaywardBird

Thank God! Someone has a brain! :D loved this post

Thanks so much guys, really appreciate the feedback! :D And the poem is kind of based around how 'normal' kids are usually bright and shiny, like colors, and the dark ...

Everyone cheats. This is catchy and had a nice tempo. At first, I admit, I thought the poem was silly and I have better things to do. And for thinking ...

YAY! He didn't die! loooving it so far,

First of all, thank you sooooo much for your help! Second, I meant 'enemies' embrace' as a pair of enemies forgiving each other, and moving on, kind of the opposite ...

haha, Thanks aweqs! I appreciate that,

I loved this poem! It truly feels like a greek myth, and it does explain a lot as greek myths do. I liked how it rhymed, yet, not rhymed. It's ...

Meh, like I said, take the advice you think is worthy. And I like my rhyming scheme, even though it is a bit amature :). I just prefer the simple ...

Thanks! That stuff made a whole lot more sense and sounds a lot better! :)

I liked the poem's theme and the words used, but they seem a tad long. Perhaps if they were simply cut in half because I can't tell when it's supposed ...

SoggyPoptart thank you! Oh, I'm blushing, :D

To Lacey Thank you so much for the 'Ripping' (Lol,), I appreciate the hints and they do seem to make much more sense. I'll make the changes in the poem, ...

Sorry it's taken me to reply! But to ¡CaptainRandom! Thanks and I get where you're coming from with the 'liked it but didn't know why' thing, and I think it's ...

I think if you're talking about the devil in "He is satin in every form," It's spelt Satan. But, of course wherever you are it might be spelt Satin. Other ...

I liked the ending, but the Caretaker locking up the school didn't make much sense to me. Why a school? Why not a Morgue? or a Library? Or perhaps a ...