WaywardBird

that story has just become my facebook status, thank you so much. :) I loved this story, since I am a bit of a wonderbug. That is, I like the ...

Hehehe, this story made me laugh. I also noticed you are relatively new to the Society, so welcome aboard. The story seemed professionally done, with just enough detail and good ...

I loved the dark tone of this poem, how it flows and keeps the beat. The rhyming is a little off in some spots, although I can't put my finger ...

I liked this story a lot. A good fable to tell. However, the reactions between sun and moon seem a little strange, for instance, what is the signifigance of the ...

mmmkay I have really know idea how that made sense, and in some places it didn't, but I was STILL swaying by the end of the poem! that was beautiful, ...

I liked this a lot, but I can't really say where to go with it. My only critique is that fish don't actively 'bleed'. (Yes, this is mostly me being ...

NONO! No cliffhangers allowed! (I am planning to follow like this the entire story, so please bear it. :) ) Other than a few grammar mistakes, I can't really see ...

All I have to say is "amen girl-friend", you have just described the serious case of Hypergraphia. The rhyming and the words were simple, yet effective. If you want to ...

I've been following this story since you posted the prologue, and I LOVE it! It's got that kind of ethereal feel to it, while also managing real relationships. It reminds ...

I really liked this poem, it was really tragic and strong at the same time. :) My only issue is, to me it doesn't sound like... A human race poem ...

My only issue is when you say 'metaphorical hoe.' The term just seems out of place in the 'bittersweet' of the poem. I felt the hurt, and I know how ...

I really liked this poem. It put to mind a storm, or some sort of busy but gorgeous chaos. A typhoon perhaps? I liked the line of 'the lines in ...

Meh, I try not to bag on other people's hard work, but I didn't really dig this as much as I feel as I should of. I loved the message, ...

It was really good, and I appreciated how this was longer than most others. However, I do have a few nags, and these are mostly just me, sorry :). When ...

Meeehhhhh... I can FEEL the potential, but it sounds like it needs to bake a little longer, know what I'm say'in? Things seemed to move a long just a little ...