Way2Dawn

thanks for the review and yeah my 45 second revising and editing didnt catch all the mistakes but im not gonna change it. thats my final work rather its crap ...

Thanks for everyone how has read this report overall I think it is my finest. And a very special thanks to those who have reviewed and commented on this topic ...

Hey nice preface i like how the scientist has split personalities that leads to his untimely demise. I also like that in his death comes life I hint a bit ...

Very interesting piece of work. I enjoyed the way you describe dreams in this without fear you just lay it all out. I'm curious though if you had the ability ...

Nice poem if only there was a girl like that around here sadly such a girl only exist in poems and dreams hopefully your ideal is different. But anyways once ...

Short poem but well to the point I liked it. Though I'm not a poet and I have only written one poem I thought this one was pretty good.

Nice poem not moving nor is it cliche, but a steady balance of the two.

Short poem and I can see that you did put your heart into it more then time. Which is a good thing. As a review I have nothing. Its Flawless. ...

Seems like a nice little start to an good horror tale. As a review I would advise editing your punctuation and capitalization other then that looks pretty good!

Nice poem short, sweet, and to the point. As for a review I would suggest more sophisticated words and not so liner rhymes, but it was good and a humorous ...

Very exciting I like the way you write.