Way2Dawn

A bit dark though it seems quite suitable should the reader permit. You did a great job telling this story through your poetry though the imagery is not top of ...

Well written and well developed! Besides a few minor mistakes this poem is great over all. Not quite sure what you are trying to get through it still had me ...

Another fine job June. Great topic to write a poem on and twist and turn it the way you did in this. Though its still not all that clear to ...

Great work! Using bold lettering to present your questions and answer them in normal text is quite innovative and original. I tip my hat to the way you present your ...

Another great piece seemingly from what you have written that I have read you always included death in your poetry. Nice way of having your work brought to attention I ...

Great piece you have written! Though I only remotely get what message you have share it still can be praised for being well written and presented! Again I say great ...

Not too sure what message you are getting through with this, but I do feel the emotion in this piece. "Then bleed you out" I wonder if you mean literary ...

Though I'm not quite sure what you are trying to get through with this poem its great in its way. I imagery in this is wonderful and you did a ...

Great work on this I feel a bit of symbolize in this piece and think that it is more about the Lord protecting us from the wolfs rather physical or ...

Nice work of describe a friend with a wounded heart yet faces the facts and moves on (more or less). I wonder this runs parallel with your life if you ...

Great work I not quite share what you are trying to get through with is piece but it sounded good nevertheless. Is it a girl with a broken heart or ...

Good poem you stress the point of losing a loved one close friend or someone much great. You hit all the right beats on this piece to make it great ...

Interesting enough for me to read it twice however I'm not to sure what message you are trying to share in this, or what exactly the poem is about. Yet ...

Interesting poem at the very lest. A bit dark in its own light however. Should this run parallel to your life I raise my glass to ya! Though its not ...

Nice poem emotional and true. I know of those who smile simply because they have to. Simply to keep certain people happy or at the very lest content. Yet one ...