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Re: Outspoken Rain
Your book is really good so far! I like how you write and think you have good potential for story writing! I hope you will PM me when you have ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever.
I love it! I was drawn in from the beginning. Its got a really good plot so far and I can already see some of whats going to happen! There ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart - Ch-1(Olivia)
Wow I loved chapter 1 just as much as I loved the prologue. In the prologue I kinda felt bad for Amanda, but after reading chapter one I feel as ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue (REVISED)
Wow! That was truly amazing! You have a true passion for writing and you can see it in your work. I was hooked by the end of the second paragraph! ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: Story Currently Untitled-Chapter 1
I really like your work. I found it a little confusing at first since I didn't know what it was about but by the end I think I got it. ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: first chapter...
Your book is very good. It pulled me in and I couldn't stop reading. There are a few spelling errors and some grammatical errors but I was so into the ...
Mar 19, 2010
