WarriorVoice

This is very good. I like the figurative language and I can relate to it. I also like the repetition, but I think you shouldn't just repeat everything twice. It ...

Hey! I don't see anything wrong with all country songs being a little the same. After all, although love is different for different people, it still has many of the ...

Hmm. I thought it was going to be a little cliche, killing for the lover, but the ending surprised me and justified the parts that were a bit overdone. But ...

Hey Terracotta, It's repetitive to say that you know what you're doing, but I'm going to say it anyway. You clearly know what you're doing. The language flowed and fit ...