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Re: Seek Not My Heart
Thank You all so much for all the praise and I hope to bring you better work in the future! Thanks again!
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: And the Lights Go Out on Broadway
As I was reading this poem, I wasn't sold on it. For most of it, I wasn't sure what you were trying to portray but then the ending came and. ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: The Talking of Swans
I loved this, I could feel the inspiration and as I was reading it, I just got filled with emotion. I'm usually pretty tough but this song was beautiful, I ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Drowning in the Liquor
thank you for the review! i played this song with my band and it went over very well. Thank you again for the review
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: Like a sea that has no shore
By a sea without a shore I meant that it will be a grief that will have no end for me because I loved her with all my heart and ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: Slow Play
This poem is a bout GOLF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: A sick game
I strongly disagree with the above critic because I believe the constant repetition is meant to strongly convey one point and I think it does so very effectively. work on ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Short poem: Door to heaven
I didn't really like the imagery and alot of the meaning was a little scewed the rhymimng pattern was annoying after a while but oerall it was solid and u ...
Nov 19, 2008