Wariofart

Hey, wariofart here for a review. So this piece was decent. It's funny, because I just reviewed something that had the exact same set-up as this. Popular trend? When you're ...

Hey, wariofart here. The main problem with this piece is that there's no conflict . And conflict is what makes writing a story. Right now, you're just describing yourself riding ...

Hello head4ever2thesky22, welcome to YWS! I'll be your reviewer for today. Overall: I thought this was a nice piece, even though it was quite short. I don't think that's a ...

Hey ChibiBear. I hope you don't mind my directness. Overall: The piece on a whole, is quite average. There's nothing really great about it, except for the surprise ending, and ...

Hello. I really enjoyed this piece. The informal writing style was great for us uneducated people. You made something as strange and distant as paranoia seem quite real. I also ...

Hello. wariofart is here, and a review is coming your way. Overall: I'm not sure how long this piece is, but the part you posted seems to really short. The ...

The other reviewers have pretty much said everything I was going to say about this piece. So I'm just going to give my opinions on it. At the beginning, I ...

I thought this song was pretty good. It flows well for the most part, and I can only imagine how awesome the tune is. The verses for the most part ...

Hello, wariofart is here for a review! As the other reviewers have said, you need to work on showing and not telling, character realism, etc. Right now the main character ...

As everyone else said, this was a very unique and interesting piece. However, beyond the silly idea that frogs can be gangsters, this piece doesn't really have a lot going ...

Hello. I never review song Lyrics, but I thought, "hey, it's reviewing sunday, let's try something new!" I also never heard the song you are parodying (is that a word?). ...

Hi, I've read the prolouge and chapter 1, but decided I would give a review for this. Plot: I've read The Hunger Games awhile ago, and am trying to remember ...

Hello, wariofart here to review. I'm not expert, so I'll just be playing this by ear. Hope it helps. Description: First, the descriptions. They were fine, but seemed lacking. There ...

Okay, so I really liked the start of this. Really , really liked it. (by the way, to make text italicized, just highlight what you want and click the " ...

wariofart here for a review! I'm not a expert on really anything about writing, but I hope this'll help you a bit. I just have to start out with this: ...