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Re: Monster Beneath My Bed
LOL!! Oh my goodness I'm dead!! I love how dark and ominous the whole poem is made to seem all for it to actually just be a kid in bunk ...
Nov 20, 2020 -
Re: how to treat a case of powdery mildew
Goodness gracious! I love this sooo much!! I really love the metaphor that your mental health is this little garden that you work to cultivate. Its really accurate because your ...
Nov 20, 2020 -
Re: Advertisement
I absolutely love this. I love the imagery of the first stanza and totally relate to sitting down all ready to read but then realizing that Ive forgotten something. I ...
Oct 17, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1: Sebastian
Queen you did it!! I love this story so much and I can't wait to see what you do with it!! God ok where to even start... 1) Dominic. I ...
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Re: "Can you keep a secret?"
Wowza ok. Am I a little freaked by the manic energy and constant giggling of this girl. Yes sir I certainly am. She seems so off I have no clue ...
Oct 17, 2020 -
Re: Hold On
I relate to this so much. I love the way you have the struggling character trying to hide what they're thinking and feeling. That seems very realistic to me and ...
Oct 17, 2020 -
Re: topic vs theme of the text
Ok so to be honest Im usually quite dense with poetry so I am apologizing in advance if any of who I say is not what you were going for. ...
Oct 17, 2020 -
Re: Mindfulness Poem
Wow. Goodness gracious I love this so much. I like to say that I am highly susceptible to feeling a lot and I feel like this poem really expresses how ...
Oct 17, 2020 -
Re: Self Exile
Wow. Just wow. I really felt this piece. I am also constantly leaving home to fly off somewhere else so I understand some of this pain. I also live fearing ...
Oct 17, 2020 -
Re: Roommates with a Witch
Hello! I read this the other night and found it absolutely hysterical! I was honestly cackling as I read it! Things I love about this: 1) "Their sculpted bare chests ...
Oct 17, 2020
