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  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Monster Beneath My Bed

    LOL!! Oh my goodness I'm dead!! I love how dark and ominous the whole poem is made to seem all for it to actually just be a kid in bunk ...

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: how to treat a case of powdery mildew

    Goodness gracious! I love this sooo much!! I really love the metaphor that your mental health is this little garden that you work to cultivate. Its really accurate because your ...

    Nov 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Advertisement

    I absolutely love this. I love the imagery of the first stanza and totally relate to sitting down all ready to read but then realizing that Ive forgotten something. I ...

    Oct 17, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1: Sebastian

    Queen you did it!! I love this story so much and I can't wait to see what you do with it!! God ok where to even start... 1) Dominic. I ...

    Oct 17, 2020
  • Short Story » Other, Supernatural Re: "Can you keep a secret?"

    Wowza ok. Am I a little freaked by the manic energy and constant giggling of this girl. Yes sir I certainly am. She seems so off I have no clue ...

    Oct 17, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Hold On

    I relate to this so much. I love the way you have the struggling character trying to hide what they're thinking and feeling. That seems very realistic to me and ...

    Oct 17, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: topic vs theme of the text

    Ok so to be honest Im usually quite dense with poetry so I am apologizing in advance if any of who I say is not what you were going for. ...

    Oct 17, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Mindfulness Poem

    Wow. Goodness gracious I love this so much. I like to say that I am highly susceptible to feeling a lot and I feel like this poem really expresses how ...

    Oct 17, 2020
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Self Exile

    Wow. Just wow. I really felt this piece. I am also constantly leaving home to fly off somewhere else so I understand some of this pain. I also live fearing ...

    Oct 17, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Roommates with a Witch

    Hello! I read this the other night and found it absolutely hysterical! I was honestly cackling as I read it! Things I love about this: 1) "Their sculpted bare chests ...

    Oct 17, 2020


There is nothing to fear from someone who shouts.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart