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Wajudah

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The art of life

    Hey Laure! I love the fact that there is not a single spelling error in your work. Specifically, I'm not aware of any. The concept of life as art reminds ...

    Apr 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Of Butterflies and Moths

    Your story caught my attention straightaway because it's so intriguing. But in it, there are a few concepts that I wouldn't buy. I mean with the way the story goes, ...

    Apr 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Ode to Ice Cream

    A few spellchecker callers. Rather, this is a very interesting poem. Actually, I'm not conversant with poetry, odes especially. But here, even the title draws attention. I mean there's a ...

    Apr 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Almost.

    "If you are stand there at sunset" Maybe I'm the one who's not getting the context here, I can't say. But it doesn't really convey a clear meaning. There are ...

    Apr 14, 2014


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