VuzzyCat

Nice poem! I agree with the things that the previous comments said, but other then that, it was awesome. It's not the type of poem I usually like, but this ...

Really cool poem. I liked it. It didn't seem forced and it just fell of my tongue smoothly. Nice job! I disagree with some of the things that jaetwee said, ...

No! Don't trust him again! Really good story! I felt the emotions of Lilly very strongly, which I think is hard to do for a character. The only spelling mistake ...

Hey Shadow! I loved your story! There were only a few spelling and grammer errors, but I'm not going to be a show off and point them out. ;) I ...

This poem actually made me cry. :'( But really good job! The rhyme was nice and it seemed to flow nicely. I like the rythm and how easy it was ...

This is a really good poem! Nice, short, sweet, and simple. It has a brilliant point. I've never thought of that. The only thing that you need to change was ...

This is a really good poem! I love the message it sends. And I didn't see anything wrong with it. Good job! My favorite part was the entire last verse. ...

Really depressing. But you did a really good job with it! Few points: 1.)I would add an 'it' in there so it makes more sence so it looks like this. ...

That is a really deep poem. Really sad too. I enjoyed reading. You had great vocabulary. At first, I was confused about what you were actually writing about, but it ...

I love those books! They are my favorite! Good job with all of the characters, I thought they were pretty accurate to the book. And the story was too. I ...

Ah, that's sad, and cute. Good peice, I really connected with the character. My only thought is that it didn't have enough detail The end was the best with that. ...

Aww... That's such a sweet poem! I love it! One correction: I constantly think back to our middle school times, the moments we spent saying "Hi" and "high-fiving" touched my ...

Love it! That was really good, and I loved how you made it rhyme. I think poems are best when they rhyme. My only question is what exactly this poem ...

Really loved the poem! I love how you describe both fear and excitement. Good descriptions. My only suggestion would be to break up you lines more because it is a ...

That was amazing word choice! Sometimes i had problems understandin what you were trying to say, but I am not very good at vocabulary. :D Really good! I enjoyed it, ...