Vivian

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Verlaine is fifteen and her parents and grandparents are trying to force her to be someone she is not. I don't know who that ...

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Verlaine is fifteen and her parents and grandparents are trying to force her to be someone she is not. I don't know who that ...

Thank you for pointing all this out to me, I missed it when I reread this chapter before.

Thanks Silver.

Thanks for the review. I'll post the next chapter after two more reviews or by the end of the month. Whichever comes first. Also, sorry if the POV shifts trip ...

I figured and you're welcome.

ooh, interesting. Fight on Tally.

Thanks, the genre is a little bit of rock and pop.

Thanks, I will. Learn something new every day.

Cool, thanks for reading. I think it's called a prologue. Unless you're thinking of an epilogue. Exactly how did the writing style seem off?

Lol, thanks. You've got a point.

Thanks, I'll do my best to change it so it is not so overwhelming. Um, I can't really remember if i meant she had simply been in the room for ...

Thanks Grace, I always do that with paragraphs. Actually, this is supposed to be a prologue but maybe I'll only do the last bit as the prologue and have the ...

I think the poem's pretty good. I don't get why you have those brackets and the =sign. The T in there should be lower cased.

I love it, I'm proud I figured out how to read it.