Vita

This is really good and I really really enjoyed it. I'm really glad that you portrayed a non-romantic friendship between a man and a woman, that's rare in writing and ...

Hi there! Another great and funny chapter. You definitely still have my attention. Their were a few things that could have been worded more clearly, and I've put my suggestions ...

Oooh, I like this! A well written adventure story with a strong female lead? Sign me up. I found some spots that could be worded more clearly and succinctly, but ...

Hi! Let me just say that I love this! Della is so funny and snarky, exactly the kind of character I love. This was super fun to read. For the ...

Hi! I saw this in the green room and went back to the first chapter to read the whole thing. I really like your concept. Like Plume said, it definitely ...

Hi! Vita here with another review. I really enjoyed this chapter, It had a lot of really good writing. I liked seeing Gwen get mad (or rather serious) with Blizzard, ...

Hi! sorry again that I'm so late, I'll try to get caught up soon. I really liked this chapter, I thought the pacing was really good and the action felt ...

Hello! Sorry I'm so late to review, I've been super busy with school and haven't been active on YWS much recently. Jumping right in, this is a really good chapter. ...

Hello! Vita here with a review, as requested. I saw a huge improvement in your writing this chapter. You fixed most, but not all, of the grammatical errors, making this ...

Hello there! You're somewhat new, so welcome to YWS! You definitely have a suspenseful and creepy story here! Those murders sounded pretty gruesome. To be honest, I would have liked ...

Hi! Vita here with a review. So, this chapter is pretty short, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Not much happened, basically we just know that Gwen is now planning ...

Okay, now things are really getting interesting! This chapter is probably your best so far. The pacing is less breakneck and you seem to have found your stride. The world ...

Hi! I'm Vita, and I'll be reviewing your prologue. Okay, so I can see a lot of potential in this. First of all, I like your premise. A teenager/young adult ...

Hi! Vita here with a review! This chapter again has really excellent world building. You've clearly put a lot of thought into what our world would look like with superheroes ...

Hi there! Vita here with a review. I was so excited to see a superhero story, since I'm working on something similar and its always interesting to see how other ...