Virgilius

I AM IN NO WAY A PROFESSIONAL IN THE FIELD OF POETRY SO PLEASE FEEL FREE TO DISREGARD AL I SAY... but please don't(-;. Now that I liked. I found ...

I AM IN NO WAY A PROFESSIONAL SO FEEL FREE TO DISREGARD ALL I SAY. I loved your poem. It was simple honest clean and very organized. I have not ...

HEY I AM IN NO WAY AN EXPERT IN THE FIELD OF POETRY SO FEEL FREE TO DISREGARD MY OPINION. I liked it. There a simple review for a simple ...

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I AM IN NO WAY A PROFESSIONAL IN THE FIELD OF POETRY SO FEEL FREE TO DISREGARD MY OPINION. Well yes that was interesting. Obviously free verse which to an ...

Hay to all asking about the rhyme scheme. I usually write in more of a free verse because I like the chaos that can be represented without even considering the ...

The turn refers to a neck being broken eg life being ended ...thus I felt a capital was required.

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The tone is nice and light. It easily creates a feel of tranquility even without considering the wording. I would like if it had a bit more of a rhythm ...

The tone is nice and light. It easily creates a feel of tranquility even without considering the wording. I would like if it had a bit more of a rhythm ...

I love how at the end of each stanza you spaced the words to show hesitation. Well I think that was what your going for.

Again like I keep saying to everyone ...great please just use proper spacing. Yes I realize I suck at reviewing.

The only issue I have is the lack of spacing a poet myself I can completely understand the miss use of grammar but still i would suggest having a look ...

Thanks for the comments and review as I left out I have actually only spent about 20min on this so far and obviously there is still a lot lacking but ...