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Virgilius

  • Poetry » General, General Re: cloudy knees, dirty skies

    I AM IN NO WAY A PROFESSIONAL IN THE FIELD OF POETRY SO FEEL FREE TO DISREGARD ALL I SAY ,but please don't(-; I loved that... I know I say ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Exclusively For You

    Hey Virgilius here for a review. I AM IN NO WAY A PROFESSIONAL IN THE FIELD OF POETRY SO PLEASE FEEL FREE TO DISREGARD ALL I SAY... but please don't. ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My Love, Not my Life

    I AM IN NO WAY A PROFESSIONAL SO FEEL FREE TO DISREGARD ALL I SAY. I loved your poem. It was simple honest clean and very organized. I have not ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Dirty Knees, Cloudy Skies

    HEY I AM IN NO WAY AN EXPERT IN THE FIELD OF POETRY SO FEEL FREE TO DISREGARD MY OPINION. I liked it. There a simple review for a simple ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: you are my indian summer

    I AM IN NO WAY A PROFESSIONAL IN THE FIELD OF POETRY SO FEEL FREE TO DISREGARD MY OPINION. Well yes that was interesting. Obviously free verse which to an ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Game Over!

    I AM IN NO WAY A PROFESSIONAL IN THE FIELD OF POETRY SO FEEL FREE TO DISREGARD ALL I SAY. I loved your poem expetialy since its a change of ...

    Sep 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: September Eleventh

    I AM IN NO WAY AN AUTHORITY ON POETRY SO DO FEEL FREE TO DISREGARD ALL I SAY. I love your use of imagery in this poem and you may ...

    Sep 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: spines we break

    THIS IS NOT A PROFESSIONAL OPINION. I really like the imagery and the use of metaphors in your poem. I would like if you would have made use of spacing ...

    Sep 20, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Your Mouth Forms My Name

    THIS IS NOT A PROFESSIONAL OPINION. I personally liked this poem for the way you actually mixed ideas so that they may appear nonsensical ...keys chains... and how you spaced ...

    Sep 20, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Heart of Ash

    I love the imagery and I truly believe that is probably going to be the hallmark of any of your future poetry. Im not really a fan of the spacing ...

    Sep 20, 2015


I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
— soundofmind