Virgil

Thanks so much for the review! I'll definitely take your suggestions into account and re-edit it to support the message more.

He would be disappointed if he were still alive, but he's not! :p

Thanks so much! c: Glad it made you laugh.

I actually did not notice that! Maybe you could make that just a tiny bit clearer in your edits with this? But, now that you've explained it, I totally get ...

Thanks so much for the review, Pomp! I agree on the fact that the line about the brain concaving is out of place, and I think I'll end up replacing ...

Thanks for the review, Lizz! I loved the way you formatted it, since it added a lot of character. I've since changed it to 'make amends' in the second-to-last line ...

Ah, okay! It's totally okay to change styles, it's part of developing your writing.

Is it okay if I ask why you used so many commas? Also, I'm glad the review helped!

Thanks so much for the review! You helped quite a bit, and I really do appreciate the depths you went into in your review. This definitely deserves a follow after ...

I did indeed!

No problem! Glad to see it was helpful.

No problem! Glad to see it was helpful.

No problem! Glad to see it was helpful.

Yeah, I totally get that you didn't intend to romanticize that type of thing, and yeah, I figured that much but you never hinted that in the poem so the ...

S'okay! I appreciated your kind words, and I may have been a little harsh because it's a pet peeve of mine, changing aspects of stylistic choice in poetry.