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Virgil

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: The Progeny: Chapter 50

    I have read here and there, though not all of the chapters, so yeah, that could be the case. It's okay to explain yourself! I don't mind.

    May 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: The Progeny: Chapter 50

    I do agree in writing what you want to read, but if the majority (that's what it seems like at the moment) say that the pacing and the plot are ...

    May 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Ten Gallon Tank

    Oh hey, I didn't know that aspect! I would've took that into consideration if I knew or followed your NaPo thread better towards the end. Not being able to use ...

    May 5, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Afraid

    No problem! Glad I helped. c:

    May 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: hacker, dearest

    Formatting on the site, or just in general? o: Also that prompt doesn't seem too bad!

    May 4, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, Historical Fiction Re: The Angkor Monolith (Part 1/3)

    Experimentation is always good! Glad that the review helped. c:

    May 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Infinitesimals

    Thank you for sharing your opinion!

    May 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Infinitesimals

    Hi there Lizz! I don't agree with you on one part of your review--when you said that it wasn't helpful, because I found it to be. Thanks so much, I ...

    May 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Infinitesimals

    Sorry that I didn't get to this earlier, because I totally forgot! Thanks for the review and I'll definitely take what you had to say into account.

    May 3, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: Aschenputtel Chapter 1

    Totally understandable, regarding the formatting messing up. I'm glad the review helped though!

    May 2, 2017
  • Lyrics » Humor, General Re: Tik Tok Review Clock

    This is silly and great @niteowl! I love it.

    May 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Strangers- chapter one

    Glad to see the review helped!

    May 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: What Happens

    I'm happy that you're so willing to learn! You don't have to use repetition in the piece and could just let it flow without it, or using it with more ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Infinitesimals

    Thanks so much for the review! It definitely helped. I'll have to experiment more with structure, and yeah, I've become a little obsessed with the line length so much so ...

    Apr 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Stylistic Choice

    It's not generic! Also, thanks so much! I've taken your input into account in my edits of the piece.

    Apr 21, 2017


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