Virgil

Now I feel like you should know the original ending! The last two lines were 'though what's the point/if i can't get out of bed/in the morning'. Err, three, I ...

Not actually about a significant other! That's your interpretation, though. This is more about the mental health of the speaker or the lack of therapy they've received. I won't dig ...

Thank you! I figured this would be the response from you, though I'm glad it's confirmed. This is more trying to spin the idea of the sun and moon metaphor ...

No problem!

No problem!

WHAAAAT? The whole time I've been thinking he's super old alongside Edna. I guess I should have known better when Edna talked about hooking him up with her...great niece? Before ...

And he's in a nursing home? O: I want to know more about his backstory if that's the case. Is there a reason he's retired so early or?

I like it for different reasons than the other poem, actually! It's still nice and I think it's an improvement though yes, it is quite the change. This draft is ...

Audy what are you doing to my feels. I might be back later for a review because you're absolutely fabulous. Just wanted to drop by and note that I loved ...

It's a KotGR badge, so I'm not doing this for no reason. I know some don't enjoy getting reviews on works that are old, but I assumed that the lovely ...

Thank you! I'll take your criticisms into account definitely in the next revisions. I wanted to note that this isn't actually about a relationship this time around and more in ...

Oops. I totally forgot about that. Nah, probably not. You can if you want to. I just have a terrible memory.

Oops! That one line in the middle of there is not meant to be there. It's been fixed.

You can do it! Get that next star!

Thank youuuu!