Virgil

No offense taken! ;) Perhaps this belongs better in The "I wrote a poem, but don't need reviews" thread because you weren't looking for reviews and well...because this is posted, ...

Hello year-old Lumi. I finally liked this review. Thanks for the review again buddy!

O: Thanks for the info! That helps understand a lot more of what's going on, hehe.

Thanks for the review, Stella! This definitely helped a lot especially because we posted this with little editing and wanted to see what others thought. The cohesion...I figured that'd be ...

Nope! I'm totally okay with that discussion. I wanted to thank you so, so much for the response!

Setting up future exciting parts chapters are often what I get stuck on. :p Not by accident, but by luck! This isn't the type of setting that I favor either, ...

The conversation is definitely needed, yes! Thanks for the clarity on the name as well. On the topic of the dialogue, I suppose we have different views on scenery. I ...

I've never found a poem to be pure adorable before, but you've done it! This is definitely a picker-uper to read. Nice job on making me giggle! That doesn't happen ...

Thank you for the review! This helped a lot. I really do appreciate you taking the time to comment on this.

Thanks for the review, Chillx! Glad the poem is enjoyable.

Insert the part you're wanting to quote into the [quote][/quote] code! c:

Nah, it's not a fictional poem. Don't be sorry! No reason for you to be. I'm glad you liked the poem though! Thanks for the review.

No problem bud! Any time.

Sorry if the review came off harshly! Didn't intend for it to be that way. I forgot to mention this in my review--your cliffhangers are on-point! That's what I want ...

Thanks for the review!