Virgil

@BlueAfrica Thanks for pointing that out! You definitely spoke a part that I didn't in my review and fleshed it out more. Tagteam! c:

Thanks so much!

Thanks for the review!

Those aren't grammatical mistakes, haha. For one, the lack of capitalization was a stylistic choice of the poem and generally if you choose not to, you don't have to follow ...

Thanks for the review!

Ahh, one way you can do it is put all of one stanza in a line and then hit 'shift enter' after each line, or if that's too vague you ...

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Aww, I'm sorry for your loss. And yeah, your reasoning makes sense for the poem.

Definitely helped, thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks!

No problem! Always feel free to comment or call me out when I say something that isn't right or is something that contradicts myself. I can do that sometimes and ...

Ohhh, that makes much more sense now! And I don't really know how otherwise you would implement it into the poem, perhaps use context clues for that? I can see ...

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This is Kaos here for a review! So I felt on a spiritual level with amelie on this one is that the poem didn't really do anything new, at least ...

Thanks for the reply! Truly, I think the most of what you do in revision form is give us more solid facts and sources, because that's kind of what we ...