Virgil

This is Yams here for a review! First off, the poem doesn't have any stanzas which may have been because of the Yws formatting system and I will link this ...

This is Yams here for a review! The story/thing doesn't even really make too much sense to me, are they only together in April? The other thing is that it's ...

This is Yams here for a review! My main thing with this poem is that each stanza is really repetitive. And not in a very good way in my opinion. ...

This is Yams here for a review! I see this more as a skit than a play. Plays are usually longer than this and have scenes. Not just one scene, ...

This is Yams here for another crappy and probably quick review! It was considerably smaller than Elborn's WAGON prototype, and much more comfortable. I don't feel like "WAGON" has to ...

This is Yams here for a really quick review! This is all one stanza which kind of makes it harder on the eyes to read so I suggest you reformat ...

This is Yams here for a review! I'm going to be honest with you and say you've added nothing new and have just mis-mashed of what love songs and war ...

This is Yams here for a review! The first third or fourth had little dialogue and I felt like it didn't need to be dragged on for so long with ...

This is Yams here for a review! With a heavy knapsack slung over her back, Rease was ready to face the world. Well, only a part of the world. Dried ...

This is Yams here for a review! I'm going to be honest with you and say this is just like every other love poem and that you've added nothing new ...

This is Yams here for a review! My soul resides in the driver’s seat, But my heart’s inside four tires. What's the difference between a soul and a heart in ...

This is Yams here for a review! "Who is they" is the question the readers are asking too. I didn't really know what was going on, etc. I didn't know ...

This is Yams here for a review! I don't seem to like this poem all that much even though some of the visuals are good. All the parts where "Oh ...

Yams here for a review! I felt like everything after the fourth paragraph was weaker than the rest. The imagery kind of leaves and it just goes on to stuff ...

This is Yams here for a quick review! You use the word "words" or "word" so many times in this poem. Like I get it's about words, but it gets ...