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Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 9.2
I got distracted by poetry in the Green Room and then a discussion on something. Oopsies. I am here now and very excited to read these next two chapters. Let's ...
Jun 30, 2017 -
Re: The melancholy of the triumph of the fall...
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Welcome to YWS, itsfranknappa! If you ever have any questions, don't be afraid to ask. So I see that this work ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 9.1
Goodness, I am so here. I realize that Edna is a bold soul and that she's perfect for being the Chosen One at the beginning of this chapter. Over time, ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 8.2
I am back again a little later than expected, though I am here nonetheless. It took Edna thirty seconds to recover, thirty seconds in which she ran through every bad ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: the anatomy of fear
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review as promised! So I meant to get here sooner, though I kept forgetting that you wanted me to review this, but ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: One Wish
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I have to say that I'm not much of a fan of this poem, or to be more specific here, ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: Dear Queer Girl in the Closet
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Hi Becca. You know I'm almost always here to deliver some critique on your poetry, and this'll be no exception. With ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: Love
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I see that you're new to the site, so welcome. If you have any questions, don't be afraid to ask them! ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 8.1
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Chapter eight already? I think I might actually be caught up soon. Then again, leaving her cane would only have made ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 7.2
The temptation to go straight to chapter ten and boot that out of the Green Room is strong. I assume someone else will get around to it but I feel ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: Anonymous
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! What I'm most confused by here is the rhyme scheme. The main complaint I have there is that this isn't consistent. ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Wings of Ravens
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Wow indeed! This is for a different reason though. I don't usually see the usage of imagery or worldbuilding of the ...
Jun 28, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 7.1
Glad I haven't been here to drop by for a review already. I don't want that to happen anymore so I can do this all in one go instead of ...
Jun 28, 2017 -
Re: bleu / azul / blu
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I have to say that the aesthetic of this poem is nice. That's the main aspect here that I enjoyed ...
Jun 28, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 6.2
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I had to go back and re-read the last chapter since I believe I reviewed that on a Review Day when ...
Jun 28, 2017
