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Virgil

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 9.2

    I got distracted by poetry in the Green Room and then a discussion on something. Oopsies. I am here now and very excited to read these next two chapters. Let's ...

    Jun 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: The melancholy of the triumph of the fall...

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Welcome to YWS, itsfranknappa! If you ever have any questions, don't be afraid to ask. So I see that this work ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 9.1

    Goodness, I am so here. I realize that Edna is a bold soul and that she's perfect for being the Chosen One at the beginning of this chapter. Over time, ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 8.2

    I am back again a little later than expected, though I am here nonetheless. It took Edna thirty seconds to recover, thirty seconds in which she ran through every bad ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: the anatomy of fear

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review as promised! So I meant to get here sooner, though I kept forgetting that you wanted me to review this, but ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: One Wish

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I have to say that I'm not much of a fan of this poem, or to be more specific here, ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Dear Queer Girl in the Closet

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Hi Becca. You know I'm almost always here to deliver some critique on your poetry, and this'll be no exception. With ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Love

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I see that you're new to the site, so welcome. If you have any questions, don't be afraid to ask them! ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 8.1

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Chapter eight already? I think I might actually be caught up soon. Then again, leaving her cane would only have made ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 7.2

    The temptation to go straight to chapter ten and boot that out of the Green Room is strong. I assume someone else will get around to it but I feel ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Spiritual Re: Anonymous

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! What I'm most confused by here is the rhyme scheme. The main complaint I have there is that this isn't consistent. ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1 - Wings of Ravens

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Wow indeed! This is for a different reason though. I don't usually see the usage of imagery or worldbuilding of the ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 7.1

    Glad I haven't been here to drop by for a review already. I don't want that to happen anymore so I can do this all in one go instead of ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: bleu / azul / blu

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I have to say that the aesthetic of this poem is nice. That's the main aspect here that I enjoyed ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 6.2

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I had to go back and re-read the last chapter since I believe I reviewed that on a Review Day when ...

    Jun 28, 2017


I wondered why we put villains in our stories when we have plenty of them in real life; then I realized that maybe we wanted stories where the good guy wins.
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