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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Candy Land Ch. 1 (Restart)

    I am more of a man of plot and character development as opposed to grammar and word choice. However, using the word 'cringe' in the social context as opposed to ...

    Oct 19, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Euclides

    This particular story almost seems poetic in nature, and I really like it! I'm currently developing a story that exploits the nature of these legends and tales of the heroes ...

    Oct 18, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Those With Wings

    I really don't understand how this story isn't getting much attention: I thoroughly enjoyed it! Dragons are unfortunately being used less and less as time goes on. They have become ...

    Oct 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Hestia's Hearth: Chapter 1, Azure Dogs

    I REALLY love the unorthodox magic system that you have going on in this story. I've played World of Warcraft for a long time and I was really perplexed in ...

    Oct 18, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Just the start

    I'm usually critical of other's stories, but I understand you haven't written in years, so I'll be considerate (I'm ignoring grammar and some word choice). The first thing I'd like ...

    Oct 17, 2016


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