Vincent

this was a great part and i love war poems! there a bits and pieces of sentences were you tottally cut of the flow And while those battles Are fought ...

nice, i really liked this too. i dont have a big sister instead i have the oppisite: a little brother but this makes me think of how i act. its ...

i enjoyed this a lot and cant wait to find out what happens next. The two colossal spires showed above the canopy of trees. They were the symbol and the ...

this is an amazing story and i cant wait to read more! just watch out for repeating words like wolf and stuff. heading in the direction of the clearing where ...

whoa... that was awesome. i love the idea and where this story is going. you describe the character well, byt not the enviroment. its like characters walking around in darkness ...

this sounds amazing and ill read it! you just have to work on discription more, because when you said "killing everyone in their path" doesnt give us much info, we ...

an amazing story! i couldnt stop reading. i could actually imagine myself being in the middle of a blazing stadium full of dead and dying, in the chase between a ...

Great story, i enjoyed reading it. one thing though: He bent down and threw a couple of logs into the fire and looked to the outside where the snow lightly ...

i enjoyed this story. there were a few errors like "busses" and stuff, and some of the sentences dont run smoothly. try reading through it yourself, it helps. overall, great ...

I enjoyed the story and i think you can really make this turn into a hit. the only problem is that you tend to make little mistakes, like, "She always ...

Its a great story! but at one stage they are looking at a wooden building and then she sits on a wooden bench. using the same word like that doesn't ...